![]() ![]() Many sentences changed direction in the middle. Second, the book was supposedly edited by "Edit Queen." There being many grammar, spelling and punction errors too numerous to mention, I suspect that "Edit Queen" didn't do much proofreading past the first 10 pages or just scanned it. Then, he has millions of refugees migrating to -where? like Lemmings. These could have been condensed and placed at the beginning of the book to set the stage. Somewhat disruptive in the flow is the chapters leading off with a "radio broadcast" not really connected to the chapter or the plot flow. While this is a new apocalyptic approach (in my wide reading), the plot seems to have a lot of events from other P-A books. The plot is based on a massive Midwest earthquake that disrupts the entire USA. ![]() ![]() Some of the action and dialog is overly dramatic, almost Gothic. The plot moves along in fits and starts and reflects a neophyte writer. ![]()
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